DÀNH CHO CÁC BẠN HỌC YẾU WRITING TASK 2 - HƯỚNG DẪN CHI TIẾT CÁCH VIẾT TỪ A-Z
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ĐỀ BÀI:
It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and solutions?
▶️Dịch câu hỏi: Thật khó để cho người dân thành phố ngày nay tập thể dục đều đặn. Đâu là những lý do cho điều này và hướng giải quyết để cải thiện?
▶️Dạng câu hỏi: Cause – Solution (Câu hỏi này chỉ hỏi về nguyên nhân cho việc thiếu tập thể dục, nhưng chỉ tập trung vào những người ở thành phố và những biện pháp)
1. CẤU TRÚC BÀI VIẾT
♦️Introduction:
Giới thiệu về chủ đề được đề câu trong câu hỏi
🔹 It is difficult for people in the cities to get enough physical exercise
difficult = hard = challenging
🔹 people in the cities = urban people = city citizens = city dwellers = inhabitants of the cities/ metropolis
🔹 get enough = do st regularly = do st suffiently >< lack st / face a shortage of st
🔹 physical exercise = workout = physical practice
2. ĐƯA RA CÂU TRẢ LỜI
Có hai lý do chính dẫn tới những người dân thành phố khó có thể tập thể dục đầy đủ - thiếu không gian phù hợp (lack the suitable workout places) và thiếu thời gian (shortage of time).
Để giải quyết vấn đề này, cá nhân và chính phủ cần phải thực hiện một số hành động.
♦️Body paragraph 1:
- Topic sentence: Có hai lý do chính khiến việc tập thể dục đều đặn đối với người dân thành phố khó khăn
+ Supporting idea 1: Thành phố lớn quá đông dân cư (overpopulated/ densely populated) → dẫn tới thiếu không gian cho những nơi công cộng như công viên (parks, gyms) → thiếu nơi tập cho người dân gần nhà
+ Supporting idea 2: Lối sống sôi động ở thành phố (vibrant lifestyle/ hectic pace of life) → bận rộn với công việc (be swept into the maelstrom of work/ be too occupied with work) - hơn 40 tiếng đi làm (more than 40 hours a week in the workplace) và thời gian cho các mối quan hệ và bạn bè (hang out with friends), thú vui khác ( other entertainments) → không có thời gian cho cá nhân (no personal time) → không có thời gian tập thể dục thường xuyên
♦️Body paragraph 2:
- Topic sentence: Có những biện pháp khác nhau mà chính và cá nhân có thể thực hiện để giải quyết vấn đề này
+ Supporting idea 1: Về phía chính phủ (government), họ có thể đầu tư xây dựng nhiều khu tập thể dục ngay cạnh nơi sống người dân → người dân dễ tiếp cận và tới nơi tập (st becomes more accessible) → đi tập thường xuyên hơn
+ Supporting idea 2: Về phía mỗi cá nhân (individuals), tranh thủ thời gian trống để tập thể dục như đi thang bộ lên văn phòng (walk downstairs and upstairs at office), đi bộ nhanh sau bữa trưa (brisk walk after lunch)
Conclusion: Tóm tắt lại nội dung bài viết
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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - CHỦ ĐỀ BUILDING
Chào các bạn, lại là mình đây!
Đầu tuần chắc hẳn nhiều bạn đã quay trở lại trường học để học rồi phải không?
Hôm nay cùng luyện viết essay task 2 nhé. Đây là một đề đã ra đi ra lại mấy lần năm 2018 và 2019 rồi đấy. Các bạn hãy cố gắng luyện viết với các đề thi thật những năm về trước để có một sự chuẩn bị tốt nhất cho kì thi IELTS của mình nhé.
Đề bài:
Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Dịch câu hỏi: Một số người nghĩ rằng những ngôi nhà mới xây cần đúng theo phong cách của các ngôi nhà cũ xung quanh. Nhưng những người khác lại nghĩ rằng mọi người nên có quyền tự do xây dựng nhà cửa theo phong cách riêng của họ. Hãy thảo luận hai ý kiến trên và đưa ra ý kiến của riêng bạn.
Dạng câu hỏi: Discuss with opinion
Nhiệm vụ của người viết như sau:
- Giải thích vì sao một số người ủng hộ việc đi theo cùng 1 phong cách thiết kế nhà
- Giải thích vì sao một số người lại có ý kiến về sự đa dạng trong phong cách thiết kế nhà
- Đưa ra ý kiến mình ủng hộ quan điểm nào hơn
CẤU TRÚC BÀI VIẾT
✅ Introduction:
- Giới thiệu chủ đề được đề cập: Phong cách design của một căn nhà
- Giới thiệu hai ý kiến và đưa quan điểm cá nhân rằng mình ủng hộ quan điểm số 2
>> Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style.
🔸 follow the style = a common architectural style/ an identical architectural style
🔸 have freedom = be let free to do st = be at liberty to do st
🔸 build = construct
✅ Body paragraph 1:
Topic sentence: Một vài người nghĩ rằng nhà mới xây nên đi theo phong cách của các ngôi nhà cũ
Supporting idea: Điều này là do việc có chung một kiến trúc sẽ giúp duy trì những kiến trúc độc đáo và các giá trị văn hóa của địa phương → Do đó, rất có thể trở thành một địa danh thu hút khách du lịch. Ví dụ: Phố cổ Hội An
✅ Body paragraph 2:
Topic sentence: Tôi nghĩ rằng các cá nhân nên được tự do lựa chọn phong cách cho căn nhà của họ
Supporting idea 1: Do ngôi nhà là tài sản các nhân của họ, nên họ có quyền quyết định kiến trúc của ngôi nhà
Supporting idea 2: Ngôi nhà nên đi theo sự phát triển của xã hội và công nghệ, giúp đem lại sự thoải mái và an toàn lớn nhất cho người chủ, thay vì là đi theo một xu hướng chung nào đó
✅ Conclusion: Kết luận và trả lời lại câu hỏi.
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introduction in a sentence 在 黃之鋒 Joshua Wong Facebook 的精選貼文
泰晤士報人物專訪【Joshua Wong interview: Xi won’t win this battle, says Hong Kong activist】
Beijing believes punitive prison sentences will put an end to pro-democracy protests. It couldn’t be more wrong, the 23-year-old says.
https://www.thetimes.co.uk/article/joshua-wong-interview-xi-wont-win-this-battle-says-hong-kong-activist-p52wlmd0t
For Joshua Wong, activism began early and in his Hong Kong school canteen. The 13-year-old was so appalled by the bland, oily meals served for lunch at the United Christian College that he organised a petition to lobby for better fare. His precocious behaviour earned him and his parents a summons to the headmaster’s office. His mother played peacemaker, but the episode delivered a valuable message to the teenage rebel.
“It was an important lesson in political activism,” Wong concluded. “You can try as hard as you want, but until you force them to pay attention, those in power won’t listen to you.”
It was also the first stage in a remarkable journey that has transformed the bespectacled, geeky child into the globally recognised face of Hong Kong’s struggle for democracy. Wong is the most prominent international advocate for the protests that have convulsed the former British colony since last summer.
At 23, few people would have the material for a memoir. But that is certainly not a problem for Wong, whose book, #UnfreeSpeech, will be published in Britain this week.
We meet in a cafe in the Admiralty district, amid the skyscrapers of Hong Kong’s waterfront, close to the site of the most famous scenes in his decade of protest. Wong explains that he remains optimistic about his home city’s prospects in its showdown with the might of communist China under President Xi Jinping.
“It’s not enough just to be dissidents or youth activists. We really need to enter politics and make some change inside the institution,” says Wong, hinting at his own ambitions to pursue elected office.
He has been jailed twice for his activism. He could face a third stint as a result of a case now going through the courts, a possibility he treats with equanimity. “Others have been given much longer sentences,” he says. Indeed, 7,000 people have been arrested since the protests broke out some seven months ago; 1,000 of them have been charged, with many facing a sentence of as much as 10 years.
There is a widespread belief that Beijing hopes such sentences will dampen support for future protests. Wong brushes off that argument. “It’s gone too far. Who would imagine that Generation Z and the millennials would be confronting rubber bullets and teargas, and be fully engaged in politics, instead of Instagram or Snapchat? The Hong Kong government may claim the worst is over, but Hong Kong will never be peaceful as long as police violence persists.”
In Unfree Speech, Wong argues that China is not only Hong Kong’s problem (the book’s subtitle is: The Threat to Global Democracy and Why We Must Act, Now). “It is an urgent message that people need to defend their rights, against China and other authoritarians, wherever they live,” he says.
At the heart of the book are Wong’s prison writings from a summer spent behind bars in 2017. Each evening in his cell, “I sat on my hard bed and put pen to paper under dim light” to tell his story.
Wong was born in October 1996, nine months before Britain ceded control of Hong Kong to Beijing. That makes him a fire rat, the same sign of the Chinese zodiac that was celebrated on the first day of the lunar new year yesterday. Fire rats are held to be adventurous, rebellious and garrulous. Wong is a Christian and does not believe in astrology, but those personality traits seem close to the mark.
His parents are Christians — his father quit his job in IT to become a pastor, while his mother works at a community centre that provides counselling — and named their son after the prophet who led the Israelites to the promised land.
Like many young people in Hong Kong, whose housing market has been ranked as the world’s most unaffordable, he still lives at home, in South Horizons, a commuter community on the south side of the main island.
Wong was a dyslexic but talkative child, telling jokes in church groups and bombarding his elders with questions about their faith. “By speaking confidently, I was able to make up for my weaknesses,” he writes. “The microphone loved me and I loved it even more.”
In 2011, he and a group of friends, some of whom are his fellow activists today, launched Scholarism, a student activist group, to oppose the introduction of “moral and national education” to their school curriculum — code for communist brainwashing, critics believed. “I lived the life of Peter Parker,” he says. “Like Spider-Man’s alter-ego, I went to class during the day and rushed out to fight evil after school.”
The next year, the authorities issued a teaching manual that hailed the Chinese Communist Party as an “advanced and selfless regime”. For Wong, “it confirmed all our suspicions and fears about communist propaganda”.
In August 2012, members of Scholarism launched an occupation protest outside the Hong Kong government’s headquarters. Wong told a crowd of 120,000 students and parents: “Tonight we have one message and one message only: withdraw the brainwashing curriculum. We’ve had enough of this government. Hong Kongers will prevail.”
Remarkably, the kids won. Leung Chun-ying, the territory’s chief executive at the time, backed down. Buoyed by their success, the youngsters of Scholarism joined forces with other civil rights groups to protest about the lack of progress towards electing the next chief executive by universal suffrage — laid out as a goal in the Basic Law, Hong Kong’s constitution. Their protests culminated in the “umbrella movement” occupation of central Hong Kong for 79 days in 2014.
Two years later, Wong and other leaders set up a political group, Demosisto. He has always been at pains to emphasise he is not calling for independence — a complete red line for Beijing. Demosisto has even dropped the words “self-determination” from its stated goals — perhaps to ease prospects for its candidates in elections to Legco, the territory’s legislative council, in September.
Wong won’t say whether he will stand himself, but he is emphatically political, making a plea for change from within — not simply for anger on the streets — and for stepping up international pressure: “I am one of the facilitators to let the voices of Hong Kong people be heard in the international community, especially since 2016.”
There are tensions between moderates and radicals. Some of the hardliners on the streets last year considered Wong already to be part of the Establishment, a backer of the failed protests of the past.
So why bother? What’s the point of a city of seven million taking on one of the world’s nastiest authoritarian states, with a population of about 1.4 billion? And in any case, won’t it all be over in 2047, the end of the “one country, two systems” deal agreed between China and Britain, which was supposed to guarantee a high degree of autonomy for another 50 years? Does he fear tanks and a repetition of the Tiananmen Square killings?
Wong acknowledges there are gloomy scenarios but remains a robust optimist. “Freedom and democracy can prevail in the same way that they did in eastern Europe, even though before the Berlin Wall fell, few people believed it would happen.”
He is tired of the predictions of think-tank pundits, journalists and the like. Three decades ago, with the implosion of communism in the Soviet bloc, many were confidently saying that the demise of the people’s republic was only a matter of time. Jump forward 20 years, amid the enthusiasm after the Beijing Olympics, and they were predicting market reforms and a growing middle class would presage liberalisation.
Neither scenario has unfolded, Wong notes. “They are pretending to hold the crystal ball to predict the future, but look at their record and it is clear no one knows what will happen by 2047. Will the Communist Party even still exist?”
https://www.penguin.co.uk/books/111/1119445/unfree-speech
introduction in a sentence 在 Lindie Botes Youtube 的最讚貼文
Hey guys! For those of you new to my channel, hi! I'm a polyglot YouTuber from South Africa and this is my wacky channel intro. My aim for this video was to see how fast I could switch between languages mid-sentence, mid-thought or mid-conversation. It might confuse you to follow all the switches, so I added flags to indicate the language at the top right, and I kept English subtitles for every spoken part.
I always try to be honest and transparent with you guys - so here's my real, unscripted, updated polyglot self introduction/channel intro!
Kinda nervous to upload this cause you guys can totally see how I haven't improved much since the previous polyglot video, har har.
I hope you enjoy it! I tried some new editing styles as well, so feel free to let me know what you think. If you have a polyglot intro video too, link it in the comments so I can check it out!
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introduction in a sentence 在 pennyccw Youtube 的最佳貼文
For those who were there at McDonough Gymnasium on August 4, 1994, few will forget the arrival of a 6-0 freshman guard who needed no introduction. The rumors of Allen Iverson's arrival to the Kenner Summer League were true, and by game's end, Iverson had scored 40 points. By the Sunday afternoon final, before an overflow crowd inside the gym and a crowd of those outside who could not get in, Iverson finished a combined 99 point effort in three days against some of the best collegiate talent in the city. This, of course, from a player that had not played organized basketball in over a year. The Allen Iverson years had begun. A brief profile can't do justice to tell the story of one of the greatest pure athletes ever to attend Georgetown, a man without peer in his talent over two years at the collegiate level. Just a year before his Kenner debut, few would have imagined Allen Iverson ever playing college basketball. Iverson was not only a 31 point a game guard for Bethel HS, but a football player of tremendous skill. As a quarterback and defensive back his sophomore season, he produced nearly 1,600 yards offense and 13 INT's. By his junior year, he accounted for 2,204 yards, 21 touchdowns by rush or interception, and 14 touchdown passes. In a region which has produced NFL quarterbacks such as Michael Vick and Aaron Brooks, there are those who will still say "Bubbachuck" Iverson was better than both of them. Schools such as Arkansas, Kentucky, Duke, and three dozen other top programs across two sports were vying for perhaps the greatest two-sport star the Tidewater had ever produced. When he led Bethel to the state title, someone asked what it was like to win the title. "I'm going to get one in basketball now," which he did. In late February, 1993, en route to the state title he had promised, Iverson was one of a large group of Bethel teammates at a Hampton bowling alley when a fight broke out between students from rival schools trading racial insults. Three people were hurt in the aftermath. Despite conflicting testimony from eyewitnesses and no clear evidence linking him to the crime, Iverson was one of four black students arrested. Racial tensions were heightened when the prosecutors passed on a misdemeanor assault charge and charged Iverson with three counts of felony "maiming by mob", which carried a 20 year prison sentence. Despite video evidence which did not place Iverson in the crowd at the time of the fight, he was convicted in a racially charged case. The 20 year sentence was later reduced to five, and Iverson was granted clemency by Gov. Douglas Wilder three months later, sending Iverson to a detention program at an alternative high school. (The original charges were thrown out by the Virginia court of appeals in 1995.) In the spring of 1994, with Iverson still in detention, his mother approached John Thompson with a plea to help her son get to college and start a new chapter of his life. Though Thompson had passed on a number of troubled players in the past, he offered Iverson a scholarship in April of that season, contingent upon his completion of high school and his legal release, which was granted 48 hours before his Kenner debut. By his debut in a Georgetown uniform in November 1994, Iverson had been the subject of intense national media attention. In the Hoyas' annual exhibition with Fort Hood, Iverson scored 36 points, five assists, and three steals in 23 minutes. Local columnists were in awe. "Hang his number up in the rafters," wrote Tom Knott of the Washington Times. "He's better than most of the point guards in the NBA right now." Allen Iverson Kobe Bryant Tracy Mcgrady Vince Carter Dwyane Wade Shaq Jermaine O'Neal Gilbert Arenas Tim Duncan Kevin Garnett Yao Ming Chris Bosh Steve Nash Lebron James Carmelo Anthony Chris Webber Dennis Rodman Steve Francis Stephon Marbury Shawn Marion Amare Stoudemire Michael Jordan Scottie Pippen Charles Barkley Larry Bird Magic Johnson Karl Malone John Stockton Boston Celtics New Jersey Nets New York Knicks Philadelphia 76ers Toronto Raptors Chicago Bulls Cleveland Cavaliers Detroit Pistons Indiana Pacers Milwaukee Bucks Atlanta Hawks Charlotte Bobcats Miami Heat Orlando Magic Washington Wizards Dallas Mavericks Houston Rockets Memphis Grizzlies NO/Okla. City Hornets San Antonio Spurs Denver Nuggets Minnesota Timberwolves Portland Trail Blazers Seattle SuperSonics Utah Jazz Golden State Warriors Los Angeles Clippers Los Angeles Lakers Phoenix Suns Sacramento Kings