在找到了第一份工作，確認8月份開始上班之後，一個多月前，逸安的第二位雇主與他聯繫，談定了實習的時間、工時鐘點與大致工作內容，在8月第一份實習工作結束後，9月立刻開始第二份工作。
第一週在辦公室上班，熟悉事務，接著就能在家處理工作，因為是責任制，無需每日去辦公室。但要保證隨時在線上，也要有最高做事效率。這當中有一整週，被允許參與一個新的建設項目，必須在外縣市的工地待命與實習。
最後，當然也說到薪資。
這讓我們認識到月薪百萬起跳之專業經理人的格局，與工種型態的差異。光一份給全無經驗的菜鳥實習生的薪水，居然高到直逼我這個習琴36年的州政府教職人員，甚至比台灣碩士學位新鮮人的起薪還要高，讓從未接觸過這個領域的我們開了眼界。
除了工種差異造成薪資差距之外，逸安本身的基礎條件，如通德文/英文/西班牙文/拉丁文與中文，加上出身口碑挺好的雙語中學，整個八年中學的學年成績單清一色都是第一的表現，雖不至於因此提高薪水，但在尋求實習機會時，也多了些許好感資本。
所以說，知識絕非無價，而是超脫價值。（誤）
成績單上的成績，一部分取決資質，但資質之外的勤奮認真，才是表象之下的言外之意。
沒有誰是什麼都不做，就能讓從天上掉下來的好運砸個正著。
與不少學生特別加強學科弱點的方式不太一樣，逸安在他最熱愛的物理和數學這二門科目，投注了最多時間心神。
不會因為最得心應手，因此花費較少心力，而是相反。
就是因著熱愛與擅長，所以有鑽研的熱情，好，還要更好。
就算是一個簡單的小考，他也會用足精神去徹底準備。
而他不拿手的文科，他則是確切分配好進度，按表操課地念，準備時間一般不會超過三天。念至恰到好處就停止，不強求極致完美，也不糾結結果。
因此數理的超標高分，與中上的文科項目一平均，就能在不折磨自己的前提下，以最快樂的學習過程與最自在輕鬆的氛圍，相對輕鬆地拿到總平均第一的好成績。
這樣與一般學生念書習慣相反的作法，卻讓他始終保持在榮譽榜。
在他身上，體現了「補強，不補弱」這個學習真意。
喜歡的事做到了極致，整體身心能量都會提升，進而帶動改善了原本不那麼擅長的弱點。
且此種方式很大程度地維護了身心能量，讓本該苦哈哈的高三生活奇蹟般地愜意。能維持交際花本色，每隔二天就與好友出門練滑板一下午或出外散步，還常能與同志們上線打怪闖關。
之前要不是因為疫情，健身房歇業了，我想他還會固定去健身練肌肉。這陣子封城令逐漸解禁，雖然去到任何密閉公共空間，都得事先快篩並提出沒有過期的證明，但不阻擋他每週4次去健身房固定鍛煉1個半小時。
我活了四十幾年，還沒見過那麼輕鬆歡樂的高三應屆畢業生呢。🙄
應屆碩士畢業生英文 在 Re: [履歷] 應屆畢業生英文自傳求批- 看板Salary 的推薦與評價
※ 引述《a765112223 (芹菜)》之銘言：
整體文法用字都有待加強
但我沒有全部改出來 只針對邏輯跟內容上的問題做評論
(如果有不對的地方 也歡迎板上的朋友提出意見)
: Extends the deep respect to your industrious work, even you are very busy.
: Thanks to glance through my material. And hoped that it can open an
: opportunity and the success gate for me.
1. 以上整段全刪 客套話不用寫在求職自傳上
: My name is ooxx, Betty is my English name. I do a Master’s. degree
2. 姓名這兩句也刪 履歷一開頭就有你的姓名 不須贅述
3. Master's.(為什麼會有點?) degree 請改成 master's degree
只有當指特定的碩士學位 如M.B.A. 才會用大寫
: in finance at National oo University and research on Fixed-Income
: security. The topic of my paper is ‘Information uncertainty and corporation
: bonds’ liquidity’. I choose to research fixed-income because its low
: volatility and it can take stable income. I believe that it will be helpful
: not only for my work in the future but my financial planning.
4. paper改成thesis
5. 這段看不出來你的碩士論文/學位跟應徵金融業儲幹有甚麼關係
: I learned to be independent and helped to take care of my younger brother
: when I was a child. It makes me become a thoughtful, reliable, and
: down-to-earth person. That’s why I always be the leader in many groups.
6. 照顧家人跟成為團隊領導的關係是？
7. 如果你要用always be the leader in groups, 那理論上下一段你要提出非常強的
論述去證明這句話
: In 2010, I entered a contest which named World Economic Outlook Essay
: Competition with my friends. We had to organize three English papers and an
: English article in three hours, then presented them to judges. I used topics
: and abstracts of those paper to know the contest and let my teammates connect
: to the article. We spent two hours to organize them, and different from other
: teams we have more time to do analysis. We not only presented the information
: of those material but elaborate our conclusions. Then we got a silver medal.
8. 這段是強調競賽的經驗 我會建議你用條列法舉出重點(成果/負責工作/能力培養)
而不是過程流水帳
例如: Winning the silver medal in World Economic Outlook Essay
Competition in 2010, responsible for xxxxxx, showing that I am
capable of doing xxxxxxxx
: During the institute, because of classmates’ reliance and professors’
: recognition I continue to hold the leader of the class when reelected, even
: been picked for assistant of EMBA program to solve all of those students’
: problems. Of all assistant, they most favorite me. Whenever they need help,
: thy always find me to help deal. I'm not just an assistant, but their
: secretary.
9. 這段是研究所打工經驗(?) 建議格式如上段列成第二點
10. 結論收在 I am not just an assistant but their secretary
個人覺得非常怪(至少從你敘述的方式跟金融業儲幹連不起來)
: I also be administrative assistant in department of finance general office.
: Due to strong sense of responsibility, I don’t just finish my job, every
: time they have many works to do, I’m always ready to help to relieve their
: heavy workload. They tell me that I’m the most proactive assistant. For this
: reason I’ve worked here more than one year.
11. 建議格式如前列成第三點
12. proactive is a good term to be used in a CV, but I don't see you address
it in a reasonable way, I only see you emphasise that you are ready to
work overtime (which is very different from being proactive).
: Volleyball’s group mentality is the reason that I'm fanatic about this
: sport. Fighting with teammates and sharing the honor to each other are
: wonderful things for me. In college, I’ve been an event planner for annually
: beach volleyball activity many times. When I had different thinking from
: others, I tried to stand in others’ shoes and ask seniors for suggestions in
: order to solve the problem and make the following work be carried on
: smoothly.
13. 社團活動經驗 建議下個標題跟先前工作實務經驗作區隔 不然延續前段很不搭
14. 這段敘述中 我看不到任何"實例"去論述你具備溝通不同意見的能力
在履歷自傳上很重要的原則是，你宣稱自己有這項能力，都應該要拿得出
一個甚至更多的例子
: With my great specialized knowledge of finance and highly proactive, I am
: confident that I will fit management associate. It's been said, ‘Where there
: ’s a will, there’s the way!’ I believe that pressure can make me grow up,
: so I’m not afraid of meeting challenge. China Development Financial Holdings
: gives good opportunity and a series of well-designed training sessions to
: make freshmen become an excellent MA. Wish you can give me a chance to prove
: it. I am eager to be one of the programmers and I will pay attention to your
: firm's development as always, and express my sincerest wish.
15. Great specialized knowledge? 如果履歷有附上數篇得獎論文的話我才會這樣寫
16. 後面客套話我不會加 除非這些客套話可以增強對方對我在能力上的印象
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