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Từ vựng topic Society và bài viết Writing Task 2:
Đề bài: Nowadays young people spend too much of their free time in shopping malls. Some people fear that this may have negative effects on young people and the society they live in.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
‼️TOPIC ANALYSIS
Key words:
- young people, spend, free time, shopping centers: người trẻ hiện nay dành nhiều thời gian trong các trung tâm thương mại
- negative effect, the youths, the society: xu hướng này có ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến cả giới trẻ và xã hội
- agree/disagree: đồng ý hay không đồng ý
‼️ BRAINSTORMING
Đề bài là dạng Argumentative essay nên chúng ta sẽ đi theo hướng Disagree – không đồng ý với nhận định rằng xu hướng này mang lại những ảnh hưởng tiêu cực đến giới trẻ và xã hội. Trong bài này, chúng ta sẽ chỉ ra rằng xu hướng này mang lại cả lợi ích và bất lợi.
‼️ ESSAY PLAN
+, Mở bài:
Diễn đạt lại nhận định của đề bài và đưa ra ý kiến không đồng ý với nhận định trong đề.
+, Đoạn thân bài 1:
Đưa ra những ảnh hưởng TIÊU CỰC của xu hướng
- Đối với giới trẻ: Dành nhiều thời gian trong trung tâm mua sắm -> tốn nhiều thời gian và tiền bạc vào những đồ không cần thiết có thể gặp khó khăn về tài chính
- Đối với xã hội: Giới trẻ tốn nhiều thời gian cho việc mua sắm -> không thể tham gia vào những hoạt động như học tập và làm việc -> giảm hiệu quả học tập và lao động.
+, Đoạn thân bài 2:
Đưa ra LỢI ÍCH của việc giới trẻ dành thời gian mua sắm
- Đối với giới trẻ: Đây là một cách để thư giãn -> giúp họ tận hưởng cuộc sống và giảm stress một cách hiệu quả
- Đối với xã hội: nhu cầu mua sớm lớn ở thanh niên thúc đẩy sản xuất và thương mại cũng như tạo nhiều việc làm -> thúc đẩy phát triển kinh tế
+, Kết bài:
- Khẳng định lại ý kiến không đồng ý với nhận định ban đầu và xu hướng giới trẻ dành nhiều thời gian ở những trung tâm thương mại mang lại cả lợi ích lẫn bất lợi với giới trẻ và xã hội.
‼️ MODEL ESSAY
The young today spend a large amount of leisure time in shopping centers. It is fear that this trend can bring about negative influences on the youths and the society. Personally, I strongly disagree with this view.
On the one hand, for the young generation spending too much time at the shopping malls can make them waste a great deal of money. As there are dozens of brands with various prices and design for them to choose from, they are easily tempted to buy things impulsively and misspend money on unnecessary stuff. For example, when some big brand names slash the prices, a shopaholic may purchase 10 shirts and jeans in a row and this cost her somewhere $100; however, such items often end up being left in the wardrobe. For the society, because youngsters are unlikely to participate in other activities such as their work or studying, economy may suffer due to less work being done and the youths could slack off their knowledge acquisition, making the national education standard drop significantly.
On the other hand, there are also some advantages of this trend. First, in terms of the young, spending time at the malls is considered a method of relaxation. In modern life these days, young people have to deal with lots of pressure from school or workplace, so this trend helps them enjoy their life and effectively release their stress. Second, the society also benefits from this phenomenon. The increase in the amount of consumption will promote manufacture and commerce in the fashion industry, which afterward will create more jobs and boost the economic growth.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that devoting a huge amount of time in shopping malls could lead to both negative and positive consequences to the young as well as the society.
(299 words)
‼️ USED VOCABULARY AND COLLOCATIONS:
- To buy things impulsively: mua hàng không theo chủ đích
- Big brand names: các thương hiệu lớn
- To slash prices: đại hạ giá
- A shopaholic: người nghiện mua sắm
- To slack off: giảm bớt
- Knowledge acquisition: việc tiếp nhận kiến thức
- National education standard: tiêu chuẩn về giáo dục quốc gia
- Release one’s stress: xả stress
- To boost the economic growth: Thúc đẩy tăng trưởng kinh tế
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‼️ VOCABULARY
- Sustainable development
Meaning: sự phát triển bền vững
Example: Sustainable development will be the priority for every nation in the world in the near future.
- The escalation of social problems
Meaning: sự leo thang của các vấn đề xã hội
Example: The escalation of social problems will be the main problem in the next meeting.
- To hit/ hang out at the mall
Meaning: Dạo chơi ở khu mua sắm
Example: Hanging out at the mall has become one of the common activities for young generation.
- High-street names
Meaning: các cửa hàng nổi tiếng
Example: The youth tend to spend money more on high-street names products rather than cheaper brands.
- Must-have product
Meaning: sản phẩm hot, ai cũng mua/ có
Example: Fashion brands usually advertise their items as must-have products.
- To be on tight budget
Meaning: còn ít tiền
Example: Although they are still on tight budget, many students will spend a lot of money on luxury fashion items.
- Customer services
Meaning: dịch vụ khách hàng
Example: Customer services are now the most impotant factor for a brand to success in the market.
- Window shopping
Meaning: nhìn ngắm hàng hóa, quần áo nhưng không có ý định mua
Example: She often goes window shopping but not buying anything.
- Social net-working sites
Meaning: Các trang mạng xã hội
Example: In the era of high technology, social net-working sites are developing rapidly and attracting more and more people.
- Social services
Meaning: Các dịch vụ xã hội/ Cơ quan dịch vụ xã hội
Example: Social services should pay proper regard to the needs of inner-city areas
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“Man's potential is limitless” หรือที่มีความหมายว่า “ศักยภาพของมนุษย์เรา ไม่มีขีดจำกัด”
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หลายคนอาจคิดว่าฮุนได (Hyundai) หรือที่คนเกาหลีเรียกว่า “ฮยอน แด” เริ่มทำธุรกิจผลิตรถยนต์มาตั้งแต่แรก
...Continue ReadingKnow Hyundai, South Korea's largest business group founded by farmer's son / investment man.
′′ Man's potential is limitless aka ′′ our human potential has no limit
One sentence said by ′′ Sung Joo-Yung ′′ the founder of Hyundai Group.
Many people may think that Hyundai (Hyundai) or Korean people call ′′ Hyun Dae ′′ started in the first place in the beginning of their car manufacturing business.
But in fact, Hyundai has a starting point from the construction business.
How is this? Invest Man will tell you about it.
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Hyundai was founded by Sung Joo, a South Korean male mosquito, who was born from a farmer's family living in rural area of Kangwon province, south of Korea.
When I was young, Sungju, I dreamed that I wanted to be a student teacher.
But with poverty, he has no capital in education and no chance to follow his intentional dreams.
However, Sung Joo-Yung has been in a youthful businessman.
Because every time he travels to town, he always panting wood from his neighborhood to sell to make money.
What he does regularly when he has a chance to travel to the city.
It's to find newspaper to read, add knowledge.
At this point, that sparked his mind to earn more money to help his life and family get out of poverty.
When I start to see the opportunity that working in the city pays off.
So he plans to go out of the countryside to work in the city.
Sung Jooyung tried to run away from home to work in town many times, but he was taken home every time.
But his 4nd attempt was accomplished.
When his father doesn't come looking for him again.
In the first period, Sung Juyung started working as a laborer at Port in Inchon City.
And next to deliver rice to a rice store in Seoul.
He worked in rice stores with diligence.
And after 6 months of work, I have been promoted to take care of my shop accounting job.
After taking care of accounting job
He's getting more knowledge of business
I have been trusted by the rice shop owner who has health problems to take care of my business instead.
But shortly after, in the early 1939's, Korea took over Japan.
Rice businesses are being coerced to shut down by the Japanese Army.
He decided to bring his experience and money collected to start a carport business in his hometown in Kangwon province.
But the garage business has to shut down again from the orders of the Japanese government.
In conclusion, both rice trading and car garage business that seems to go well. It's not what he expects.
But then fate seems to be taking his side..
Because in 1945 Japan defeated WWII
Make U.S. to take care of the current South Korea or South Korea.
U.S. Entry makes doing business in South Korea more freedom.
It's this time that Sung Juyung was founded Hyundai in 1947
Initially, Hyundai started a construction business.
Because Sung Juyu, Mosquitoes South Korea needs to be restored after war ends.
One of the factors that made Hyundai grow well in the first period is because South Korea's government had several construction projects and restoration projects such as expressway, port construction and dams.
Hyundai is the winner of the South Korean government's multi-project auction.
Including other projects from the U.S. government
Later in 1965, Hyundai took first offshore road construction job.
This is a road building project in south of Thailand during Pattani and Narathi province.
Hyundai group's key step is to establish Hyundai Motor in 1967
Which today, Hyundai Motor became South Korea's largest automobile manufacturing company.
In 2018, Hyundai Motor was the world's 5th highest manufacturing company.
In 2019, Hyundai Motor proceeds 2.8 million baht, profit 83,000 million baht and now it's worth the company more than 1 trillion baht.
Hyundai group present in various businesses
Such as construction contractor, manufacturing and selling cars, retail, financial services.
Which, if all businesses are integrated into one company, the Hyundai group is considered South Korea's largest business group.
Even today, Sung Joo-yung is gone.
But his journey on his hard path to success will inspire many people.
So if we are facing difficulties now
Try to develop yourself and find a path forward.
Like the example of Sungjoo, mosquitoes from being a farmer's son, poor status can step up as the founder of Hyundai Group, South Korea's giant company nowadays..
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References
-https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chung_Ju-yung
-https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyundai_Group
-https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyundai
-https://www.referenceforbusiness.com/history2/52/Hyundai-Group.html
-https://koreajoongangdaily.joins.com/2015/03/11/industry/Road-to-overseas-construction-success-starts-in-Thailand/3001795.html
-https://www.wheels.ca/top-ten/these-are-ten-biggest-automakers-in-the-world/
-https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyundai_Motor_Company
-https://finance.yahoo.com/quote/HYMTF/Translated
